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Pass 1 (Tactical/Sentence-level): - Improved topic-stress positioning for clearer emphasis - Shortened complex sentences for better readability - Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice - Eliminated unnecessary repetition - Enhanced topic strings (subject consistency) Pass 2 (Operational/Paragraph-Section): - Smoothed transitions between paragraphs - Removed redundant text in subsection openings - Improved flow within sections Pass 3 (Strategic/Document-level): - Strengthened Heilmeier question linkages between sections - Clarified section-to-section transitions - Maintained overall argument coherence Focus: clarity and impact over nitpicking. All edits preserve technical accuracy while improving readability.
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