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Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
Pass 1 (Tactical/Sentence-level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning for clearer emphasis
- Shortened complex sentences for better readability
- Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice
- Eliminated unnecessary repetition
- Enhanced topic strings (subject consistency)
Pass 2 (Operational/Paragraph-Section):
- Smoothed transitions between paragraphs
- Removed redundant text in subsection openings
- Improved flow within sections
Pass 3 (Strategic/Document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier question linkages between sections
- Clarified section-to-section transitions
- Maintained overall argument coherence
Focus: clarity and impact over nitpicking. All edits preserve technical accuracy while improving readability.