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Tactical (sentence-level): - Eliminated choppy sentences by combining related ideas - Improved topic-stress positioning (key info at sentence ends) - Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive constructions - Enhanced parallel structure in lists and enumerations Operational (paragraph/section): - Strengthened transitions between subsections - Improved coherence within paragraphs - Enhanced flow between related ideas - Clarified connections between sequential arguments Strategic (document-level): - Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment - Improved connections between 'what is new' and 'why will it succeed' - Enhanced integration of economic imperative with technical approach - Clarified how staged structure preserves value under partial success
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