Tactical (sentence-level):
- Eliminated choppy sentences by combining related ideas
- Improved topic-stress positioning (key info at sentence ends)
- Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive constructions
- Enhanced parallel structure in lists and enumerations
Operational (paragraph/section):
- Strengthened transitions between subsections
- Improved coherence within paragraphs
- Enhanced flow between related ideas
- Clarified connections between sequential arguments
Strategic (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment
- Improved connections between 'what is new' and 'why will it succeed'
- Enhanced integration of economic imperative with technical approach
- Clarified how staged structure preserves value under partial success
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