TACTICAL (Gopen's Sense of Structure):
- Strengthened weak verb constructions
- Improved issue-point positioning and stress placement
- Converted passive to active voice where appropriate
- Tightened choppy sentences and improved flow
- Enhanced topic strings and parallel structure
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section flow):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Reduced repetition and redundancy
- Enhanced coherence within sections
- Streamlined paragraph openings for better flow
STRATEGIC (Heilmeier alignment):
- Strengthened section-to-section linkages
- Improved parallel structure in Heilmeier question answers
- Enhanced consistency in how sections reference each other
- Tightened transitions to next sections
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