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TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Strengthened topic-stress positioning (old→new info flow) - Replaced weak verbs with stronger active constructions - Improved parallel structure in key passages - Removed unnecessary passive voice - Tightened verbose constructions OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between major sections - Enhanced coherence within subsections - Clarified logical progression from state-of-art → approach - Strengthened section linkages throughout STRATEGIC (document-level): - Reinforced Heilmeier catechism alignment (what's new, why succeed) - Improved 'Why it will succeed' section with three-factor structure - Added explicit transition from State of Art to Research Approach - Removed distracting color markup - Strengthened impact statements in Goals and Broader Impacts
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