TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Strengthened topic-stress positioning (old→new info flow)
- Replaced weak verbs with stronger active constructions
- Improved parallel structure in key passages
- Removed unnecessary passive voice
- Tightened verbose constructions
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between major sections
- Enhanced coherence within subsections
- Clarified logical progression from state-of-art → approach
- Strengthened section linkages throughout
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Reinforced Heilmeier catechism alignment (what's new, why succeed)
- Improved 'Why it will succeed' section with three-factor structure
- Added explicit transition from State of Art to Research Approach
- Removed distracting color markup
- Strengthened impact statements in Goals and Broader Impacts
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