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Three-level editorial review: TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Strengthened verb choices (fail/cause vs weaker alternatives) - Improved topic-stress positioning - Removed nominalizations for clearer subject-verb relationships - Fixed inverted constructions for direct statement flow OPERATIONAL (paragraph-level): - Merged redundant Gap/Critical Need paragraphs in Goals section - Removed redundant pay-off paragraph - Integrated qualifications for smoother flow to outcomes - Maintained strong transitions between subsections STRATEGIC (document-level): - Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment throughout - Confirmed explicit 'What is new' and 'Why will it succeed' callouts - Maintained logical section progression: What/Why → Limits → How → Success → Risks → Impact → Timeline All edits preserve technical content while improving clarity and impact.
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