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Editorial pass: Gopen + Heilmeier alignment
Three-level editorial review:
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Strengthened verb choices (fail/cause vs weaker alternatives)
- Improved topic-stress positioning
- Removed nominalizations for clearer subject-verb relationships
- Fixed inverted constructions for direct statement flow
OPERATIONAL (paragraph-level):
- Merged redundant Gap/Critical Need paragraphs in Goals section
- Removed redundant pay-off paragraph
- Integrated qualifications for smoother flow to outcomes
- Maintained strong transitions between subsections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment throughout
- Confirmed explicit 'What is new' and 'Why will it succeed' callouts
- Maintained logical section progression: What/Why → Limits → How → Success → Risks → Impact → Timeline
All edits preserve technical content while improving clarity and impact.