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Copy-edit: multi-pass editorial review (tactical/operational/strategic)
- Tactical: Sentence-level improvements using Gopen principles
- Improved issue-point structure (known→new info flow)
- Strengthened verb choices (active voice, stronger verbs)
- Enhanced topic-stress positioning (stress = end of sentence)
- Simplified complex sentences for clarity
- Operational: Paragraph and section flow
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Strengthened coherence within sections
- Removed redundant phrasing
- Better connected related ideas
- Strategic: Document-level Heilmeier alignment
- Sharpened section conclusions to answer Heilmeier questions explicitly
- Improved transitions between major sections
- Enhanced narrative flow through the complete argument
- Strengthened connections: gaps→approach→metrics→risks→impact
Files edited:
- research_statement_v1.tex (intro version)
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex
- 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex
- 3-research-approach/v3.tex
- 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex
- 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex
- 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex
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