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- Tactical: Sentence-level improvements using Gopen principles - Improved issue-point structure (known→new info flow) - Strengthened verb choices (active voice, stronger verbs) - Enhanced topic-stress positioning (stress = end of sentence) - Simplified complex sentences for clarity - Operational: Paragraph and section flow - Improved transitions between subsections - Strengthened coherence within sections - Removed redundant phrasing - Better connected related ideas - Strategic: Document-level Heilmeier alignment - Sharpened section conclusions to answer Heilmeier questions explicitly - Improved transitions between major sections - Enhanced narrative flow through the complete argument - Strengthened connections: gaps→approach→metrics→risks→impact Files edited: - research_statement_v1.tex (intro version) - 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex - 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex - 3-research-approach/v3.tex - 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex - 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex - 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex
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