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Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
Tactical improvements (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's topic-stress positioning for clarity
- Strengthened verb choices throughout
- Improved parallel structure in key passages
- Reduced unnecessary hedging and wordiness
Operational improvements (paragraph/section):
- Enhanced transitions between subsections
- Improved flow in Section 2 (state of the art)
- Strengthened logical connections between mode types (Section 3)
- Established clearer structural parallelism in risk discussion (Section 5)
Strategic improvements (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment across all sections
- Tightened summary paragraphs to directly answer assigned questions
- Improved cross-section transitions and references
- Maintained coherent narrative from problem → solution → validation → impact
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