Tactical improvements (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's topic-stress positioning for clarity - Strengthened verb choices throughout - Improved parallel structure in key passages - Reduced unnecessary hedging and wordiness Operational improvements (paragraph/section): - Enhanced transitions between subsections - Improved flow in Section 2 (state of the art) - Strengthened logical connections between mode types (Section 3) - Established clearer structural parallelism in risk discussion (Section 5) Strategic improvements (document-level): - Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment across all sections - Tightened summary paragraphs to directly answer assigned questions - Improved cross-section transitions and references - Maintained coherent narrative from problem → solution → validation → impact
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