Split d13f9bc117 Copy-edit: Multi-level editorial pass (tactical/operational/strategic) ...

Pass 1 (Tactical - Sentence-level):
- Strengthened verb constructions throughout
- Improved issue-point positioning per Gopen principles
- Enhanced topic-stress relationships for clearer flow
- Reduced redundant phrasing (e.g., 'either...or' instead of 'discrete or continuous')

Pass 2 (Operational - Paragraph/section):
- Tightened transitions between paragraphs
- Reduced redundancy in section transitions
- Improved coherence within major subsections
- Streamlined topic strings across paragraph boundaries

Pass 3 (Strategic - Document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier question alignment in each section
- Strengthened section-to-section linkages
- Ensured consistent logical flow throughout proposal
- Clarified 'who cares, why now, what difference' narrative

Focus: clarity and impact over nitpicking. Changes preserve technical accuracy while improving readability.

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Copy-edit: Multi-level editorial pass (tactical/operational/strategic)

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