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Pass 1 (Tactical - Sentence-level): - Strengthened verb constructions throughout - Improved issue-point positioning per Gopen principles - Enhanced topic-stress relationships for clearer flow - Reduced redundant phrasing (e.g., 'either...or' instead of 'discrete or continuous') Pass 2 (Operational - Paragraph/section): - Tightened transitions between paragraphs - Reduced redundancy in section transitions - Improved coherence within major subsections - Streamlined topic strings across paragraph boundaries Pass 3 (Strategic - Document-level): - Verified Heilmeier question alignment in each section - Strengthened section-to-section linkages - Ensured consistent logical flow throughout proposal - Clarified 'who cares, why now, what difference' narrative Focus: clarity and impact over nitpicking. Changes preserve technical accuracy while improving readability.
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