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Editorial pass: Gopen sentence-level improvements + section flow
Pass 1 (Tactical):
- Broke up overly long sentences for clarity
- Improved topic-stress positioning (stress at end)
- Strengthened topic strings across sentences
- Converted passive constructions to active where appropriate
- Enhanced verb choice for directness
Pass 2 (Operational):
- Improved paragraph transitions
- Added backward/forward references between sections
- Strengthened section coherence
Pass 3 (Strategic):
- Verified Heilmeier question alignment across all sections
- Improved inter-section linking
- Ensured answers are crisp and clearly stated
Focus areas:
- Research statement: split complex sentences, clarified three-stage approach
- Goals section: improved parallel structure in outcomes
- State of the Art: emphasized key statistics, clearer subsection transitions
- Research Approach: broke up technical complexity, strengthened 'what is new' section
- All sections: improved Heilmeier question framing and answers