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Pass 1 (Tactical): - Broke up overly long sentences for clarity - Improved topic-stress positioning (stress at end) - Strengthened topic strings across sentences - Converted passive constructions to active where appropriate - Enhanced verb choice for directness Pass 2 (Operational): - Improved paragraph transitions - Added backward/forward references between sections - Strengthened section coherence Pass 3 (Strategic): - Verified Heilmeier question alignment across all sections - Improved inter-section linking - Ensured answers are crisp and clearly stated Focus areas: - Research statement: split complex sentences, clarified three-stage approach - Goals section: improved parallel structure in outcomes - State of the Art: emphasized key statistics, clearer subsection transitions - Research Approach: broke up technical complexity, strengthened 'what is new' section - All sections: improved Heilmeier question framing and answers
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