Three-level editorial revision following Gopen's Sense of Structure and
Heilmeier Catechism alignment:
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved issue-point positioning (old → new information flow)
- Strengthened topic-stress (key info at sentence end)
- Enhanced verb choice and active voice
- Tightened logical connectives
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Enhanced coherence within paragraphs
- Clarified topical flow between ideas
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier question framing in each section
- Improved cross-section connections and callbacks
- Enhanced summary paragraphs linking sections together
- Clarified the through-line from gap → innovation → success metrics
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