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Three-level editorial revision following Gopen's Sense of Structure and Heilmeier Catechism alignment: TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Improved issue-point positioning (old → new information flow) - Strengthened topic-stress (key info at sentence end) - Enhanced verb choice and active voice - Tightened logical connectives OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between subsections - Enhanced coherence within paragraphs - Clarified topical flow between ideas STRATEGIC (document-level): - Strengthened Heilmeier question framing in each section - Improved cross-section connections and callbacks - Enhanced summary paragraphs linking sections together - Clarified the through-line from gap → innovation → success metrics
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