Split
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Multi-pass editorial review: tactical, operational, strategic
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's topic-stress positioning (old→new info flow)
- Strengthened verb choices and active voice
- Eliminated unnecessary hedging and wordiness
- Improved clause positioning for clarity
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Streamlined transitions between subsections
- Removed redundant transition phrases
- Improved paragraph coherence and flow
- Tightened connections between related ideas
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Fixed section reference (Section 8, not Section 7)
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment across sections
- Strengthened signposting between major sections
- Ensured each section delivers on its stated purpose