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TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's topic-stress positioning (old→new info flow) - Strengthened verb choices and active voice - Eliminated unnecessary hedging and wordiness - Improved clause positioning for clarity OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Streamlined transitions between subsections - Removed redundant transition phrases - Improved paragraph coherence and flow - Tightened connections between related ideas STRATEGIC (document-level): - Fixed section reference (Section 8, not Section 7) - Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment across sections - Strengthened signposting between major sections - Ensured each section delivers on its stated purpose
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