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Tactical (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's principles: improved topic-stress positioning, stronger verbs - Reduced passive voice and unnecessary modifiers - Split long sentences for clarity and emphasis - Tightened redundant phrasing throughout Operational (paragraph/section): - Added explicit transitions between subsections - Improved flow within paragraphs (e.g., control scopes example) - Created parallel structure for related concepts - Enhanced coherence in State of the Art section Strategic (document-level): - Strengthened value proposition (higher vs same assurance) - Improved Heilmeier alignment (why now, what's new, why it will succeed) - Better linkage between State of the Art gap and research goals - Connected economic motivation more explicitly throughout
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