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Editorial review: three-pass copy edit (tactical, operational, strategic)
PASS 1 - TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Converted passive voice to active throughout
- Strengthened weak verbs (fail → cannot, such → empty deletion)
- Improved issue-point positioning for clarity
- Enhanced topic-stress alignment
PASS 2 - OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Enhanced coherence within sections
- Strengthened flow between paragraphs
- Made section summaries more cohesive
PASS 3 - STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier question framing throughout
- Improved section-to-section transitions
- Enhanced narrative coherence across document
- Made Heilmeier answers more explicit and consistent