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Copy-edit thesis proposal: tactical, operational, strategic passes
Tactical (sentence-level):
- Improved issue-point structure (old info → new info)
- Strengthened verb choice (active voice where appropriate)
- Enhanced topic strings across consecutive sentences
- Reduced subject-verb separation
- Better stress positioning at sentence ends
Operational (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Added rhetorical questions to bridge paragraphs
- Enhanced coherence within sections
- Clarified logical flow
Strategic (document-level):
- Reinforced Heilmeier catechism structure
- Made question-answer pairs more explicit
- Improved section-ending summaries
- Strengthened forward links between sections
- Enhanced parallel structure in enumerated lists