TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning throughout (moved known info to sentence start, new info to stress position)
- Strengthened verb choices (replaced weak verbs with stronger alternatives)
- Fixed awkward passive constructions
- Improved sentence flow and readability
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Enhanced transitions between subsections with connecting phrases
- Improved coherence within sections (esp. state-of-the-art formal methods transitions)
- Strengthened logical progression between major subsections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Reinforced Heilmeier catechism alignment at section boundaries
- Improved section-to-section linkages (sections 3→4, 4→5, 5→6)
- Made explicit connections between sections and their assigned Heilmeier questions
- Strengthened the narrative arc from methodology through metrics to risks to impact
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