TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Improved topic-stress positioning throughout (moved known info to sentence start, new info to stress position) - Strengthened verb choices (replaced weak verbs with stronger alternatives) - Fixed awkward passive constructions - Improved sentence flow and readability OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Enhanced transitions between subsections with connecting phrases - Improved coherence within sections (esp. state-of-the-art formal methods transitions) - Strengthened logical progression between major subsections STRATEGIC (document-level): - Reinforced Heilmeier catechism alignment at section boundaries - Improved section-to-section linkages (sections 3→4, 4→5, 5→6) - Made explicit connections between sections and their assigned Heilmeier questions - Strengthened the narrative arc from methodology through metrics to risks to impact
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