TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles throughout
- Improved topic-stress positioning and topic strings
- Strengthened verb choices and reduced unnecessary passive voice
- Consolidated choppy sentence sequences for better flow
- Replaced colons and dashes for better emphasis where appropriate
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Enhanced transitions between paragraphs and subsections
- Improved coherence within sections by connecting related ideas
- Streamlined paragraph-level flow, especially in Section 2 and 3
- Better signposting of logical progression
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment across all sections
- Strengthened cross-references between sections
- Improved document-level coherence and argument flow
- Ensured each section clearly answers its stated Heilmeier questions
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