TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles throughout - Improved topic-stress positioning and topic strings - Strengthened verb choices and reduced unnecessary passive voice - Consolidated choppy sentence sequences for better flow - Replaced colons and dashes for better emphasis where appropriate OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Enhanced transitions between paragraphs and subsections - Improved coherence within sections by connecting related ideas - Streamlined paragraph-level flow, especially in Section 2 and 3 - Better signposting of logical progression STRATEGIC (document-level): - Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment across all sections - Strengthened cross-references between sections - Improved document-level coherence and argument flow - Ensured each section clearly answers its stated Heilmeier questions
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