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Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles
- Improved topic-stress positioning by breaking long sentences
- Strengthened verb choice (active voice where appropriate)
- Enhanced clarity through shorter, more direct sentences
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Enhanced flow between related ideas
- Strengthened coherence within sections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment throughout
- Strengthened section summaries and transitions
- Ensured each section clearly answers its assigned questions
- Improved logical progression between sections
Files edited:
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/research_statement_v1.tex
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex
- 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex
- 3-research-approach/v3.tex
- 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex
- 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex
- 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex
Focus: clarity, impact, and logical flow without changing technical content.