TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles - Improved topic-stress positioning by breaking long sentences - Strengthened verb choice (active voice where appropriate) - Enhanced clarity through shorter, more direct sentences OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between subsections - Enhanced flow between related ideas - Strengthened coherence within sections STRATEGIC (document-level): - Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment throughout - Strengthened section summaries and transitions - Ensured each section clearly answers its assigned questions - Improved logical progression between sections Files edited: - 1-goals-and-outcomes/research_statement_v1.tex - 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex - 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex - 3-research-approach/v3.tex - 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex - 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex - 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex Focus: clarity, impact, and logical flow without changing technical content.
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