Tactical (sentence-level):
- Strengthened weak verbs and passive constructions
- Improved issue-point positioning (old info first, new info in stress position)
- Removed unnecessary hedging phrases
- Fixed active/passive voice for clarity
Operational (paragraph/section):
- Added transition sentences between major subsections
- Strengthened flow between State of the Art and Research Approach
- Added connecting tissue between continuous controller types
- Improved coherence within outcomes section
Strategic (document-level):
- Made 'what's new' explicit with highlighted innovation statement
- Added summary paragraph to State of the Art defining the verification gap
- Strengthened connections between sections for Heilmeier alignment
- Clarified how the three-layer approach unifies existing tools
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