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Three-pass editorial review: TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles - Improved topic-stress positioning (key info at sentence end) - Strengthened verb choices and tightened passive constructions - Enhanced topic strings for better flow between related sentences - Consolidated choppy passages into smoother prose OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between subsections - Enhanced coherence within sections - Tightened paragraph-level flow - Reorganized content for clearer logical progression - Strengthened section endings and beginnings STRATEGIC (document-level): - Made Heilmeier questions explicit at section openings - Improved alignment between section content and assigned questions - Enhanced summary paragraphs answering Heilmeier questions - Clarified how sections link to overall proposal structure - Strengthened transitions between major sections All changes maintain technical accuracy while improving clarity and impact.
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