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Multi-level editorial pass: tactical, operational, strategic improvements
Tactical (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles
- Improved topic-stress positioning
- Strengthened verb choice, clarified active/passive voice usage
- Broke up overly long sentences for readability
- Enhanced topic strings between sentences
Operational (paragraph/section-level):
- Improved flow and transitions between paragraphs
- Enhanced coherence within sections
- Clarified connections between subsections
- Split complex sentences for better readability
Strategic (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment
- Made 'What is new?' and 'Why will it succeed?' answers more explicit
- Added enumerated lists for key innovations
- Improved section-to-section transitions
- Ensured each section explicitly answers its assigned Heilmeier questions