Tactical (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles - Improved topic-stress positioning - Strengthened verb choice, clarified active/passive voice usage - Broke up overly long sentences for readability - Enhanced topic strings between sentences Operational (paragraph/section-level): - Improved flow and transitions between paragraphs - Enhanced coherence within sections - Clarified connections between subsections - Split complex sentences for better readability Strategic (document-level): - Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment - Made 'What is new?' and 'Why will it succeed?' answers more explicit - Added enumerated lists for key innovations - Improved section-to-section transitions - Ensured each section explicitly answers its assigned Heilmeier questions
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