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Pass 1 (Tactical): Sentence-level improvements using Gopen principles - Strengthened verbs and eliminated wordiness - Converted passive to active voice where clearer - Improved topic-stress positioning (old→new info flow) - Enhanced sentence clarity and directness Pass 2 (Operational): Paragraph and section flow - Improved transitions between subsections - Eliminated redundant transition phrases - Enhanced coherence within sections - Streamlined section introductions Pass 3 (Strategic): Heilmeier catechism alignment - Clarified 'What is new?' statements - Strengthened 'What has been done?' / 'What are the limits?' framing - Ensured proper linkage between sections - Aligned language with Heilmeier questions throughout Key improvements: - Removed unnecessary methodology/approach qualifiers - Tightened economic argument in Broader Impacts - Clarified verification gap in State of the Art - Strengthened success criteria statements - Enhanced document-level coherence
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