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Pass 1 (Tactical - sentence level): - Strengthened verb constructions (fail/lack vs cannot/will not) - Improved topic-stress positioning - Reduced weak passive voice - Removed unnecessary future tense (will → present) - Enhanced issue-point positioning per Gopen Pass 2 (Operational - paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between major sections - Enhanced coherence within subsections - Smoothed flow between State of Art → Research Approach Pass 3 (Strategic - document level): - Sharpened Heilmeier catechism alignment - Clarified 'what difference it makes' (economic impact) - Strengthened 'what is new' positioning - Enhanced 'why it will succeed' specificity - Improved 'how we measure success' clarity All changes maintain technical accuracy while improving clarity and impact.
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