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Editorial pass: Tactical, Operational, and Strategic improvements
Three-level editorial review per Gopen's Sense of Structure + Heilmeier alignment:
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved issue-point structure (old info before new)
- Enhanced topic-stress positioning in key sentences
- Strengthened verb choice, reduced unnecessary passive voice
- Tightened sentence rhythm and removed redundancy
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved paragraph coherence and topic sentences
- Strengthened transitions between paragraphs and sections
- Enhanced logical flow within major sections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Sharpened Heilmeier question framing in each section
- Improved cross-section references and narrative thread
- Ensured each section clearly answers its assigned questions
- Tightened section summaries for clarity and impact
Files edited:
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/research_statement_v1.tex
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex
- 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex
- 3-research-approach/v3.tex
- 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex
- 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex
- 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex
Focus: clarity, impact, and document coherence. No content changes,
only editorial improvements for stronger communication.