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Three-level editorial review per Gopen's Sense of Structure + Heilmeier alignment: TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Improved issue-point structure (old info before new) - Enhanced topic-stress positioning in key sentences - Strengthened verb choice, reduced unnecessary passive voice - Tightened sentence rhythm and removed redundancy OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Improved paragraph coherence and topic sentences - Strengthened transitions between paragraphs and sections - Enhanced logical flow within major sections STRATEGIC (document-level): - Sharpened Heilmeier question framing in each section - Improved cross-section references and narrative thread - Ensured each section clearly answers its assigned questions - Tightened section summaries for clarity and impact Files edited: - 1-goals-and-outcomes/research_statement_v1.tex - 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex - 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex - 3-research-approach/v3.tex - 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex - 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex - 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex Focus: clarity, impact, and document coherence. No content changes, only editorial improvements for stronger communication.
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