TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles
- Improved topic-stress positioning and topic strings
- Strengthened verb choices and active voice usage
- Broke long complex sentences into clearer sequences
- Enhanced issue-point structure
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between paragraphs and sections
- Strengthened coherence within subsections
- Made connections between ideas more explicit
- Enhanced flow from State of Art → Research Approach → Metrics → Risks → Impacts
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment
- Made each section's assigned questions more explicit
- Improved summary paragraphs to clearly answer Heilmeier questions
- Enhanced linking between sections to maintain global coherence
Changes preserve technical content while improving clarity and impact.
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