TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles - Improved topic-stress positioning and topic strings - Strengthened verb choices and active voice usage - Broke long complex sentences into clearer sequences - Enhanced issue-point structure OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between paragraphs and sections - Strengthened coherence within subsections - Made connections between ideas more explicit - Enhanced flow from State of Art → Research Approach → Metrics → Risks → Impacts STRATEGIC (document-level): - Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment - Made each section's assigned questions more explicit - Improved summary paragraphs to clearly answer Heilmeier questions - Enhanced linking between sections to maintain global coherence Changes preserve technical content while improving clarity and impact.
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