Split
1293c0b0a2
Copy-edit: three-pass editorial review
Pass 1 (Tactical - Sentence level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles
- Improved stress positioning (key info at sentence end)
- Converted passive to active voice where appropriate
- Strengthened verb choice and topic strings
- Enhanced sentence-level clarity throughout
Pass 2 (Operational - Paragraph/section level):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Enhanced paragraph coherence and flow
- Tightened logical connections within sections
- Streamlined repetitive transitional phrases
Pass 3 (Strategic - Document level):
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment in all sections
- Ensured section summaries answer stated questions
- Improved document-level coherence and cross-references
- Strengthened narrative arc from problem → solution → impact
Affected files:
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/research_statement_v1.tex
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex
- 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex
- 3-research-approach/v3.tex
- 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex
- 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex
- 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex