Pass 1 (Tactical - Sentence level): - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles - Improved stress positioning (key info at sentence end) - Converted passive to active voice where appropriate - Strengthened verb choice and topic strings - Enhanced sentence-level clarity throughout Pass 2 (Operational - Paragraph/section level): - Improved transitions between subsections - Enhanced paragraph coherence and flow - Tightened logical connections within sections - Streamlined repetitive transitional phrases Pass 3 (Strategic - Document level): - Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment in all sections - Ensured section summaries answer stated questions - Improved document-level coherence and cross-references - Strengthened narrative arc from problem → solution → impact Affected files: - 1-goals-and-outcomes/research_statement_v1.tex - 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex - 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex - 3-research-approach/v3.tex - 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex - 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex - 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex
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