TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles
- Broke long sentences into shorter, punchier statements
- Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice
- Improved topic-stress positioning
- Created better rhythm and clarity
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Added backward references between subsections
- Strengthened transitions between major sections
- Improved coherence within sections
- Made topic strings more consistent
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Enhanced Heilmeier question alignment
- Strengthened section-to-section connections
- Made 'what is new' clearer throughout
- Ensured each section explicitly addresses its assigned questions
- Improved overall narrative flow
Focus: Clarity and impact over nitpicking. Changes maintain technical precision while improving readability.
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