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TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles - Broke long sentences into shorter, punchier statements - Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice - Improved topic-stress positioning - Created better rhythm and clarity OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Added backward references between subsections - Strengthened transitions between major sections - Improved coherence within sections - Made topic strings more consistent STRATEGIC (document-level): - Enhanced Heilmeier question alignment - Strengthened section-to-section connections - Made 'what is new' clearer throughout - Ensured each section explicitly addresses its assigned questions - Improved overall narrative flow Focus: Clarity and impact over nitpicking. Changes maintain technical precision while improving readability.
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