Tactical (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's issue-point structure: sentences now lead with topic
- Improved topic-stress positioning: key info at sentence ends
- Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice where appropriate
- Tightened sentence flow and eliminated unnecessary words
Operational (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections, especially at critical boundaries
- Strengthened coherence within paragraphs
- Enhanced logical progression through sections
- Clarified connections between arguments
Strategic (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment in each section
- Strengthened section summaries to explicitly answer assigned questions
- Improved forward/backward references between sections
- Enhanced overall narrative coherence
All changes preserve technical accuracy while improving clarity and impact.
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