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Tactical (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's issue-point structure: sentences now lead with topic - Improved topic-stress positioning: key info at sentence ends - Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice where appropriate - Tightened sentence flow and eliminated unnecessary words Operational (paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between subsections, especially at critical boundaries - Strengthened coherence within paragraphs - Enhanced logical progression through sections - Clarified connections between arguments Strategic (document-level): - Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment in each section - Strengthened section summaries to explicitly answer assigned questions - Improved forward/backward references between sections - Enhanced overall narrative coherence All changes preserve technical accuracy while improving clarity and impact.
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