TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's issue-point positioning (key info at sentence end)
- Improved topic-stress positioning and topic strings
- Strengthened verb choice, reduced passive voice where appropriate
- Made sentences more direct and punchy
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between paragraphs and subsections
- Enhanced coherence within sections
- Tightened paragraph structure
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier question alignment in each section
- Improved linkages between sections
- Enhanced narrative coherence across the document
Focus on clarity, impact, and readability without changing technical content.
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