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TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's issue-point positioning (key info at sentence end) - Improved topic-stress positioning and topic strings - Strengthened verb choice, reduced passive voice where appropriate - Made sentences more direct and punchy OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between paragraphs and subsections - Enhanced coherence within sections - Tightened paragraph structure STRATEGIC (document-level): - Strengthened Heilmeier question alignment in each section - Improved linkages between sections - Enhanced narrative coherence across the document Focus on clarity, impact, and readability without changing technical content.
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