TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved issue-point positioning and topic-stress alignment
- Converted choppy parallel sentences into cleaner constructions
- Strengthened verb choices and active voice where appropriate
- Enhanced punctuation for better flow (em-dashes, colons, semicolons)
- Removed redundant structural markers (First/Second/Third)
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Smoothed transitions between subsections
- Improved coherence within sections
- Strengthened topic strings linking paragraphs
- Enhanced signposting for reader navigation
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier question alignment in each section
- Ensured sections properly set up subsequent sections
- Improved consistency of strategic framing throughout
- Clarified how each section answers its assigned questions
All changes focused on genuine clarity and impact improvements
without nitpicky alterations. Git history preserves all originals.
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