TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Strengthened topic-stress positioning
- Converted passive to active voice where appropriate
- Improved verb choices
- Enhanced topic strings for continuity
- Replaced 'we' with 'this work' for consistency
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Added paragraph breaks for better flow
- Strengthened coherence in mode classification sections
- Enhanced transition from HARDENS to dL discussion
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier alignment throughout
- Strengthened section transitions
- Improved signposting of what each section answers
- Enhanced linkage between State of Art and Research Approach
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